Friday, October 25, 2013

Class Participation



Megan A.
Professor Jones
English 1100
25 October 2013
Class Participation
3. Why does reflective writing help a student learn and develop as a better writer? How does it work?
            Reflective writing can be a painful yet revealing process for a writer. Reflective writing makes a writer come face to face with their faults and weaknesses, which is not an easy task for humans who exhibit an inherently vein nature. As a writer finishes their current work, they are overcome with a sense of pride; often they have feelings that resemble those of a mother when observing their child. With this sense of pride the writer’s viewpoint is often skewed and they are unable to see the faults in their essay, they begin to live out the saying “the face only a mother could love” (metaphorically speaking of course) in relation to their essay. When writers are forced to reread their papers with the mindset that they are searching for their inherent faults, one can begin to develop as a writer. The analysis of ones faults allows them to focus on those specific issues and expand upon them. This process inherently diminishes the number of weak points in ones paper due to the exploitation of weaknesses and the undivided desire to diminish these weaknesses. 

Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Political Ad Analysis

http://www.livingroomcandidate.org/commercials/1964

In this ad, Johnson uses red herrings and [mud slinging?] to associate his opponent to something awful, the KKK. The use of dramatic images of the KKK burning a cross in a ritual ceremony along with the dialogue where the KKK seemingly promotes Goldwater allows viewers to associate Goldwater with a negative connotation.

Sunday, October 13, 2013

Problem Paragraph


Budweiser is known for its “good feeling” advertisements that air during the super bowl each year.  A theme of brotherhood connects a majority of their advertisements. Budweiser uses many different elements to portray their product as a drink that is part of a happy life, not just something to drink at parties. Through the use of rhetorical devices along with the strategic use of color and sound, Budweiser portrays its product as a timeless drink that facilitates bonding.

I am awful at writing introduction paragraphs.